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(Contains: sexual themes)
THIS IS A LEMON. LEMONS CONTAIN SEXUAL ACTS. IF YOU NO LIKE, YOU NO READ :D 
    You closed you eyes as Kid leans into a passionate kiss. Soul gently rubs his free hand on your right breast. "You're not nervous, are you?" Soul said lust laced in his tone. You softly shake your head. Black*Star leaning to your neck.  "Thats good" His breath was hot against your neck. He then began to softly lick and nip at your neck. Soul Gently began to pull up your shirt slowly then slipping his hand in. Kid pushes his lips harder and nibbles on your bottom lip asking for entrance. You gasp in surprise when you feel Soul's hand into your bra and grab your breast. Kid then toke this chance to slip his tongue in and wrap it around yours. Black*Star feeling alittle left out he quickly pulled your shirt over your head breaking your kiss with Kid. You let out a small squeak as Black*Star unhooks your bra and flings it at Kid. "Its not fair that none of you are losing clothing" You said covering your breasts with your arms. Kid lets out a sigh and gets off your lap and pulls off his jacket and unbuttons his dress shirt. Soul removes his T-shirt and Black*Star removes his shirt revealing his muscular chest. "Now this is a body ladies. Kid." Black*Star says with a smirk. Kid looks away with a pout and covers his pale chest with his arms. You stand up and wrap your arms around Kid and then pull him into a kiss. Soul wraps his arm around your slender waist and goes back to sucking on your neck. Black*Star kneels down to the waist band of you pants and pulls your pants down revealing you (F/C) panties. He gently rubs your thigh with his slim finger. Inching closer and closer to the hem of your panties. Black*Star gently rubs your clothed entrance causing a soft moan vibrate against both you and Kid's lips. Black*Star slowly slips fingers into you panties and into your womanhood going in and out. You let out another breathless moan as Black*Star puts in another digit. Still slowly pulling in and out but also scissoring motion as well. He speeds up his pace and adds a third digit. He then just pulled his fingers out. You then gave out moan of disapproval. Soul then pulled you down lay on him on the couch with your back on his stomach. Kid then unbuckled his pants and kicked them off. He gently lays his body on top of your body and rubs your cheek gently. "YAHOO IM GONNA GET LAID!" A completely naked Black*Star yelled. Soul pulls down his pants and boxers his member rubbed against you lower back. "C'mon Kid get naked" You say pulling at the waistband of his skull boxers. Kid cheeks flare up as he slowly pulls his boxers down revealing his member hard. He gently pokes your entrance. "KID MOVE YOUR HEAD DOWN!" Black*Star yelled. Kid did as he was told and Black*Star then straddled your chest pushing his tip into your mouth. You give Black*Star a death glare but soon faded as you slowly began to suck. Soul pushed his length in causing pain to shoot through you whole body. Kid slowly put his length in as Soul did making sure you could get through the pain as quick as possible. Everyone stood still waiting for you to relax and adapt to both Soul and Kid. After about a few seconds you laid you head on Soul's chest and gave a soft nod. Kid and Soul slowly pulled out and slammed back in and kept at a slow pace. You let out a moan of pleasure as you let as you take Black*Star farther into your mouth. Black*Star then thrusted foreword hitting the back throat. You gag and quickly grab his hips making sure that it doesn't happen again. You harden your sucking and pull Black*Star even father. Kid and Soul speed up their paces. You squeeze Black*Star's hips a little harder as you feel your climax come. "YAHOO!" Black*Star yelled once he released. He slips himself out, gets off your chest and retreats to the bathroom to shower off. You try to swallow it all and wipe the rest with your hand. Kid pushes himself to face you and continues his smooth pace with Soul. Soon after you met your release. Kid slides himself out and snuggles himself in between your breasts and falls asleep. Soon you and Soul fall asleep. Black*Star came out of the shower still in nothing. "Looks like they feel asleep" He whispers as he enters the living room once again. He walks over to you and pushes your bangs out of your face and lay a soft kiss on your forehead. Black*Star pulls up his boxers and lays on the loveseat. "I love you (Y/N)" He says quietly as he falls into a deep sleep.
(SMALL TIME SKIP) 
Maka walked up to her doorstep with Blair. She slowly opened her door to see the horror of what have come of leaving the four of them alone. "MY COUCH! THERES CUM ALL OVER MY COUCH! AND A NAKED BLACK*STAR ON MY LOVESEAT!" Maka screamed.
:iconfacewallplz: I hate myself for writing this. Is this even worth keeping? If it is please tell me but if not I most likely delete this :iconshameplz:
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I dont own Black*Star, Soul, or DTK
I dont own you. They do ---> :iconkidraepfaceplz::iconsoulrapefaceplz::iconblackstarrapefaceplz:
For those who cannot read it, 
www.fanfiction.net/s/10478965/…
I also will not be sending notes anymore C8<
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:iconjadefether:
Jadefether Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2015
Yahoo!
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:iconartgirl1313:
Artgirl1313 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
*dies of nosebleed*><
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ILuvRomano Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2015  New member
Same here!!!! 😆😆😆
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Artgirl1313 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
*gets box of tissues*
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Emralie Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2015  New member Hobbyist General Artist
YAHOO! I'M GONNA GET LAID!
Ok seriously? I love you and all but that's a bit too excited <3
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:iconsonicbunny101:
sonicbunny101 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2015
At least he isnt bored
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Emralie Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2015  New member Hobbyist General Artist
*reads the end*
*can't stop laughing*
Dignity Laugh Dignity Laugh Dignity Laugh Dignity Laugh Dignity Laugh Dignity Laugh Dignity Laugh 
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hyugagirl15 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2015
Can you note this to me please?
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Sonyamaneski Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
0////////0
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Scissorclaws Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2014
*rolls around laughing with a nosebleed*
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dbztrunksgirl4ever Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2014
Haha!! I burst put laughing when blackstar said IM GONNA GET LAID! LOL!!!
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TheFireDragonesReshi Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2014  Student Filmographer
Maka kill them now...
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DeathTheKidIsMyBF Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2014  Student Artist
I loved how black star yelled IM GONNA GET LAID ☆*:.。. o(≧▽≦)o .。.:*☆
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DeathTheKidIsMyBF Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2014  Student Artist
Well. Maka-chops for everyone
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:iconsonicbunny101:
sonicbunny101 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2014
Maka Chops all Around 
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DeathTheKidIsMyBF Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2014  Student Artist
Yep.
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avatarlover2 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2014
then maka tells lord death then REAPER CHOPS~
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DeathTheKidIsMyBF Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2014  Student Artist
Aye Sir!
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:iconavatarlover2:
avatarlover2 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2014
I have a theory behind the chops
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:icondeaththekidismybf:
DeathTheKidIsMyBF Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2014  Student Artist
My theory: Maka is like me, I love to slam annoying people with books. :3 what's yours?
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:iconavatarlover2:
avatarlover2 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2014
my theory: maka's mom cheated on spirit with lord death and that's where the maka chop comes out~
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MyLittleDeathNote320 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
You could just post the story in the comments its way easier or just put it on quotev
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YouNeedInsanityAdded Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2014  Student Filmographer
I love this <33333 Frog dance 
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Jessleia Featured By Owner Edited Sep 27, 2014  Student Artist
.~. Oh dear got WERE IS MY SYCTHE ITS PAY BACK TIME why did they do that to me I fell so shy now >\\\\\<
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Redrose5634 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2014  Hobbyist
Omfg I love this!!!! Is that bad!? Sooooo glad I can read it! Not lying about my age to! Bonus!!!!!!!!! Favorited! Don't delete it please!!!!
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Skylar-chan-Irwin Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2014  Student General Artist
Oh.
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:iconsonicbunny101:
sonicbunny101 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2014
Oh
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KittyLove657 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
I absolutely love your profile pic

I love Stan and Kyle!
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sonicbunny101 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2014
Thank you Heart 3D 
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MarriedToLevi Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Lmao wtf did I just read XD dam that was hot! 0///0
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3Jane1998 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2014
can I have a note?
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hetaliagirlFTW Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Note pwease
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SleepingCookie Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2014  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Please note this to me
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NepetaKarkatsBae Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2014  Professional Writer
XD they're reactions though
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greengodess88 Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2014
**head shot nose bleed**
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ArtemisFoster Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2014
NO DONT DELETE THIS ITS AMAZING!!!! And haha black*Star's reaction that he was gonna get laid
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XxCreepypastsmaster Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2014
I'm 17 so I cant read it....-_-
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Dark-Angel-Lana Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Me likey likey *smirk*
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Megummy109 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2014
Ano ne, can you please note me about this? I really love to read this~
Btw good job and keep up the good work
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mitsukunisohma Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2014
i think someone on wattpad stole this, just letting you know. or did they get permission, or its your account?
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:iconsonicbunny101:
sonicbunny101 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2014
Wait, What?
Could you send it to me?
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SleepingCookie Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2014  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Can u please please please send this to me! I know u don't send notes but it will mean soooooooooo much to me!!!!! ^.^ ;.;
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sonicbunny101 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2014
Alright I'll Send it
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Medu-Chan-666 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014  Student Writer
Can I has a note please~~~

I love them all
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Icehawkthewarrior Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I know you stopped noting this but could you note me it?

also Quotev allows some lemons on it.
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sam-the-demoness Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Awesome!!
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Melynie Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
My face is so hot right now, I'm glad I'm across the room from my mom. 
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BiohazardShorty Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014  Student Writer
😭 Magic just straight fucking magic
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NatsukoKitaMoto Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:eagerpb:  pedo would go cray if he saw that
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sugarplum10001 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
I FAVED IT AND NOT ASHAMED OF IT <(oAo)/
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